koi.ai.sarang productions was a graphics and one-shot request site launched towards the end of the year 2008.
Opened alongside legendary request sites such as deliri0us and flightseventeen, we have worked hard to maintain our status as a quality graphics request site.
Due to certain issues concerning people involved in the maintenance of this site, we will be closing down as of January 25th 2011.
Reasons and the likes will be noted here, just in case you are curious.
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KAS is currently, no longer taking requests for graphics, one-shots or any other form of fan art for Asian pop. We do, however, have a few members still accepting personal requests, to contact these people, please follow this link.
For more information on KAS and it's current standing in the graphic design community, don't hesitate to click on this link.
To contact a former member or anyone from the site, please don't hesitate to drop us a message and we will pass it on.
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For our extended affie list, please follow this link: AFFILIATES LIST
4/5 for title The story title is good but not very eye-catching. However, the title does fit the story.
15/15 Grammar && Vocabulary I didn't notice any problems with your grammar or spelling. Good job.
11/15 for plot I think for the most part, the plot could have a little more originality. But, for the most part, it's good.
9/10 for character portrayal The characters used are good for what it's worth, but I felt there could have been a little more development character wise. However, it's pretty good for a one shot. It just leaves a little to be desired.
8/10 for Foreword and summary accuracy The forewords does bring in some interest as to how the story would go, but it isn't really enough to draw the reader in and hold their interest in the story.
13/15 for story flow Your story flow was fine for the most part, but I felt some parts got a little choppy.
15/15 for writing style I enjoyed the way you wrote the story. Good job on your writing style, but do remember to be a little more descriptive.
10/10 for overall enjoyment of story I enjoyed the story and the way the story ended. It was interesting enough to actually want to read it through without getting bored of it halfway through.
Bonus: 4/5
Total: 89/100
Reviewed by Demongoddess at KAS koi.ai.sarang productions reviews
